Organizer on Amanda's News

News Title: Betelnut Girls

The group members have contributed their opinion on Amanda's article,
we made rocommandation that she delete the betel nut introduction paragraph and write more about the public view and perspective on the betel nut girls.
The following are the transcript of our conversation:

[6:37] Amandast Dezno: since there's no more advices, that's jump to the next writer!!
[6:37] Makong Broono: ok
[6:37] Amandast Dezno: oh ya~~~
[6:39] Amandast Dezno: go ahead girl~
[6:39] Fiona Galaxy: ha
[6:39] Fiona Galaxy: ok
[6:39] Makong Broono: SL?
[6:39] Fiona Galaxy: reading
[6:39] Amandast Dezno: explore urself
[6:39] Amandast Dezno: second life
[6:41] Dori Yuhara: in order to 'keep'
[6:41] Dori Yuhara: and could u explain the last sentence
[6:41] Fiona Galaxy: hey found one missspell word
[6:41] Fiona Galaxy: truck driver
[6:42] Amandast Dezno: that is the reference to credit the photographor
[6:42] Fiona Galaxy: 7 line in second paragraph
[6:42] Fiona Galaxy: hey what's our jobs
[6:42] Fiona Galaxy: we haven't desingnated our jobs right?
[6:43] Makong Broono: I AND EDITOR
[6:43] Dori Yuhara: organizer
[6:43] Dori Yuhara: this time
[6:44] Amandast Dezno: well..............~"~
[6:44] Fiona Galaxy: then i would be revierwe again??
[6:44] TonySkyBlinder Hirons: hi
[6:44] TonySkyBlinder Hirons: :)
[6:44] Amandast Dezno: no u have to change ur character
[6:44] Dori Yuhara: i'll be ur reviwer i guess
[6:44] Makong Broono: !!
[6:44] Dori Yuhara: i mean fiona
[6:44] Amandast Dezno: !!
[6:45] Fiona Galaxy: then i could be organizer
[6:45] Fiona Galaxy: ok
[6:45] Fiona Galaxy: proceed
[6:45] Amandast Dezno: well fortunately he's gone
[6:45] Fiona Galaxy: yeap
[6:45] Fiona Galaxy: kinda worry
[6:45] Dori Yuhara: interesting
[6:45] Amandast Dezno: hey~~ keep on the track
[6:45] Dori Yuhara: well about the nearing end of the story
[6:46] Dori Yuhara: what do u mean commit crime
[6:46] Amandast Dezno: doing something badXD actually
[6:46] Dori Yuhara: i think they just might seduce people commiting crime
[6:46] Makong Broono: HAHA
[6:46] Amandast Dezno: i would like to say they are making money themselves instead of doing something bad
[6:46] Fiona Galaxy: hahahha good point
[6:47] Fiona Galaxy: and causing car accidnets
[6:47] Amandast Dezno: XDDDDDDDDD
[6:47] Amandast Dezno: quite interesting
[6:47] Dori Yuhara: or you can say that they're totally different from peostitute
[6:47] Amandast Dezno: i haven't mentioned a lot about culture issue because i think it might be too complicated
[6:48] Makong Broono: i think the third paragraph is little relation to your title
[6:48] Fiona Galaxy: then why don't u eras what is betel nut
[6:48] Amandast Dezno: ok~~
[6:48] Fiona Galaxy: just discuus the industry
[6:49] Dori Yuhara: but wearing very ''cool'' doesn't equal to commit ingcrime
[6:49] Makong Broono: no the forth paragraph
[6:49] Makong Broono: fourth
[6:49] Amandast Dezno: ?
[6:51] Makong Broono: you can talk about the social comment and influence for them
[6:51] Amandast Dezno: then maybe it would be better to eliminate the sentence "commit crime
[6:51] Amandast Dezno: that's a good point
[6:51] Fiona Galaxy: yeap or how it attracts CHINESE and Japanese vissitor to watch them
[6:51] Fiona Galaxy: they are really famous
[6:51] Amandast Dezno: but therefore i have to put my comment on them
[6:52] Dori Yuhara: really?
[6:52] Amandast Dezno: i don't know either
[6:52] Makong Broono: the introduction of betel nut can be delet
[6:52] Amandast Dezno: ok
[6:52] Dori Yuhara: if u wanna shorten the article u may
[6:53] Fiona Galaxy: lots of chinese and japanese tourist they come to taiwan and watching betel nut beauties is a designated tourist option
[6:53] Fiona Galaxy: i think you can delet that paragraph
[6:54] Fiona Galaxy: so is there anything else?
[6:54] Amandast Dezno: then i'll add the tour
[6:54] Dori Yuhara: no
[6:54] Makong Broono: no
[6:54] Amandast Dezno: how to demostrate the social perspective?
[6:54] Fiona Galaxy: ok then here comes to my lamest article i guess...it's my turn
[6:54] Amandast Dezno: the negtive one?
[6:54] Fiona Galaxy: you mean what do most of the people think?
[6:55] Amandast Dezno: yes
[6:55] Amandast Dezno: ''
[6:55] Fiona Galaxy: with so many hot grils wearing little cloth on the street it's "妨害風化
[6:55] Fiona Galaxy: ha
[6:56] Amandast Dezno: haha ok
[6:56] Makong Broono: it is stigma
[6:56] Fiona Galaxy: Boo!
[6:56] Fiona Galaxy: hahhahaha
[6:56] Dori Yuhara: i think u could mention just little about social opinion
[6:56] Dori Yuhara: cuz that's not ur point
[6:56] Fiona Galaxy: yeap we have to be neutral
[6:56] Makong Broono: you can clear this stigma
[6:57] Dori Yuhara: and last
[6:57] Fiona Galaxy: as being a good jounalist...yeap! betel nut girls actually make a lot of foreign money for us!
[6:57] Dori Yuhara: i suggest u make ur title more sensational
[6:58] Makong Broono: they just wear little clothes to attract clients
[6:58] Makong Broono: they have no crime
[6:58] Fiona Galaxy: lIKE "WHAT ARE THEY SELLING ACTUALLY? BODY OR BETEL NUT"
[6:58] Amandast Dezno: maybe give me a example of sensational one
[6:58] Fiona Galaxy: JUST GAVE YOU ONE
[6:58] Amandast Dezno: hahahahahahaahah
[6:59] Dori Yuhara: like hot xxx girls
[6:59] Fiona Galaxy: NICE ONE HUH
[6:59] Amandast Dezno: ur good at rewriting u knoe
[6:59] Fiona Galaxy: hahahahah
[6:59] Makong Broono: thats a great title
[6:59] Dori Yuhara: yeah
[6:59] Fiona Galaxy: ok so are we done with this one?
[7:00] Makong Broono: fiona can't wait
[7:00] Dori Yuhara: ok
[7:00] Makong Broono: next
[7:00] Dori Yuhara: next
[7:00] Fiona Galaxy: oh cuz i need a lot of correction to mine
[7:00] Amandast Dezno: but im afraid the first title would possess negtive image
[7:00] Amandast Dezno: donedonedonedone
[7:01] Dori Yuhara: u can choose a title u like